5:08 AM, Friday January 22nd 2021
Hi! Here are my new drawings:
I paid a lot more attention to my line work this time. I realized that the first time, I was rushing a bit, and as a result not ghosting as much as I should have. I slowed down for these drawings, and hopefully you can see an improvement in the linework.
I focused more on construction for the first 2 plants, a resubmission of peaches and the jade plant, making sure to draw a lot bigger.
On the final plant, I focused a bit more on texture, an area that I still have trouble with. I tried filling in cast shadow shapes, but for some reason it still looks like the textures were "painted" on rather than just being there. Here's the mushroom I was drawing: https://s1.1zoom.me/b4158/440/Mushrooms_nature_Closeup_Leccinum_Moss_557206_3840x2160.jpg
I would love advice on where to improve regarding textures. I sometimes have trouble distinguishing between darker tones and form shadows.