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4:48 PM, Tuesday January 5th 2021
edited at 6:17 PM, Jan 5th 2021

Hello again, i have re-drawn 4 pages, all of them car's since i seem to struggle with them the most, like you mentioned these are the most difficult and time consuming and i can definitely see that now.

i hope this is an improvement over my previous attempts i think so myself at-least.

https://photos.app.goo.gl/Yt1mZ9yNgkYg4Th58

edited at 6:17 PM, Jan 5th 2021
1:31 AM, Friday January 8th 2021

This is a huuuge improvement. The way I see it, it's not necessarily that your level of skill improved - it's just that you were hitting a mental block when it came time to apply your existing skills to cars, so you ended up approaching them differently from how you'd approached all the other kinds of vehicles.

This case, it's totally different. Your constructions feel really solid and well built out, and every feature you've added exists in a way that makes sense in 3D space. There are a couple places where proportions get a little messed up (mainly on the backside of the VW beetle) but all in all you've really knocked these out of the park.

I am very pleased to mark this lesson as complete, and with it, the entire course! Congratulations, and keep up the fantastic work.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
1:49 AM, Friday January 8th 2021

Ahh i'm happy to hear that! yay!

thank you so much for creating this course it helped me immensely, your feedback has been eye opening to me!

Stay awesome!

Kind regards from the netherlands

Arnie.

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