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10:23 PM, Saturday March 5th 2022

Hi!

Do you mean this one?

https://imgur.com/a/wDZ1rxC

I use the same submission work and I add my revision in the same link.

My revision is shown after the 250 boxes.

Could I do like that or I should do another way.

Please suggest it to me.

Many thanks

12:50 AM, Sunday March 6th 2022
edited at 12:53 AM, Mar 6th 2022

oh, thank you for pointing that out. anyways for the revisions, 1 box had extension lines extended in the wrong direction namely box 3, another thing to keep an eye out is that try to avoid making lines parallel as i've mentioned above a set of lines should never be completely parallel due to perspective, also keep in mind that a shallow perspective box has its vanishing point outside the box not on infinity.

nevertheless great work as the problem with the extension lines subsided.

and so don't forget to include this challenge in your pool of warm-ups

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edited at 12:53 AM, Mar 6th 2022
12:56 AM, Sunday March 6th 2022

Hi!

I revised it again and I think so that the black line of the box number 3 should go up.

However the black line of the box number 10, if I draw up, is it still correct?

Another question, how is the appropriate way to get the agreement of 2 persons?

Could I post that request Discord?

Many thanks!!!!

4:59 AM, Sunday March 6th 2022
edited at 6:50 AM, Mar 6th 2022

Hi, sorry for the delayed response.

you didn't need to revise box number 3 though , as long as you're aware of the mistake it's fine.

for the box 10, yeah, i think the black extension line could also be on the top since that box is in 2 point perspective, but some people might object and so you can ask others for their opinion since I'm not too sure if it is still correct, but generally it's better if you could maintain the initial y with an angle that's either equal to or greater than 90 Degrees.

like what you did in#critique-exchange in discord you can just post your submission and request people for agreements in the same channel.

yep, you definitely can.

hopefully i was able to answer some of your questions, good luck with lesson 2!

edited at 6:50 AM, Mar 6th 2022
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