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1:43 AM, Thursday October 28th 2021
Hello, Im gonna check your submission now
lines
Superimposed Lines
I can see that some of your lines are fraying in both ends, be very careful about that, don't rush things, place your pencil always at the same starting point, I can see some arching too, remember to use your shoulder as a pivot, if it still persists, you can try to arch consciously to the opposite direction while drawing
Ghosted Lines
Overall this looks really good, your lines looks confident and precise, Just keep in mind to make sure you're positioning your pen correctly, some lines aren't totally marked
Ghosted Planes
I don't have anything to say here that I haven't said earlier, pretty good!
Ellipses
Tables of Ellipses
Even tho the limit to draw over your ellipses is 3, you are not forced to do it, I almost don't see any wobble, but there are some especially in the most circular ones, remember to ghost your ellipses until you are really sure on how is the motion supposed to be, remember prioritize confident over accuracy , some of your ellipses are out of bounds, be careful about that, don't rush things, take your time in these exercise.
Ellipses in Planes
Don't draw through your ellipses more than 3 times, and some of your ellipses aren't touching the bounds of the planes
funnels
Some of your minor axis are a little off, remember, minor axis should be cutting ellipses in half, even tho, you achieved to draw your ellipses snug and in bound almost every time, congratulations!, that is not easy
Boxes
Plotted Perspective
Nothing to say here, I can tell that you get the point of this
Rough Perspective
Overall you did really good here, you were kinda precise, but some of your boxes look wobbly, remember, never lose confident in your lines, first you place your dots, is in that moment when you have to think, once you start marking your lines you only have to think about that, also, if you made a mistake in your lines don't try to fix it, just pretend that is okey and keep going
Rotated Boxes
It looks really good, and try to do the outline of your boxes a little more thick so it easy to read, and the part that are behind other boxes thinner
Organic Perspective
I see too many parallel lines and lines converging to the wrong direction, the point of this exercise is that you start to think about the 3D space and perspective, lines are supposed to be converging at some vanishing point (away from the point of view), I suggest to read the lesson once again and try again this exercise, don't get bummed out because of this, is just a little mistake, you did all your earlier work really good!
Overall your work looks really good, I just think that you should redo a page of organic perspective having in mind that the lines should be converging away from the point of view.
Next Steps:
Redo a page of organic perspective having in mind the convergence of lines.
12:18 AM, Friday October 29th 2021
please come back for my lesson 2 in a month :3c
12:19 AM, Friday October 29th 2021
I did a page of organic perspective, I feel more confident about it after taking in mind what you said
12:19 AM, Friday October 29th 2021
12:49 AM, Friday October 29th 2021
That looks so much better as far as perspective goes!
You totally get the point this time, Just keep in mind to be careful whit your lines, never forget nor stop training the abilities and mindset that you learned in the lesson 1!
I'll mark your Lesson as complete
You can go to the 250 Box challenge now!
Good luck!
Next Steps:
You can go to the 250 Box challenge
Remember to use these exercise as warm ups!
good luck!
I hope to see your 250 Box challenge!
1:02 AM, Tuesday November 30th 2021
Thank you for awesome feedback :)
1:04 AM, Tuesday November 30th 2021
and epic motivational speech, my 250 boxes are out there in the wild, be careful >:)
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4:37 AM, Wednesday October 27th 2021
sorry, I think It's impossible to open your link, try to upload the images to https://imgur.com instead.
Next Steps:
upload your images to https://imgur.com
11:39 PM, Wednesday October 27th 2021
Thank you for telling me that, I forgot to set right permissions''' :)
Should be good now!
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