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8:21 AM, Thursday August 3rd 2023
hello!
I will be reviewing your homework. please note I am also a student and still on lesson 2 I may not be the best at giving advices but I will try my best!!
A. Counter Lines
Organic Arrows
--> you nailed the perspective but i see many wobbly lines your arrows. its okay if your lines are not in the intended direction.
Organic Forms with Contour Lines
-->the shapes are uneven by that i mean the ends of the sausage are very different also the orientation of your ellipses is same. there is no change in the angle.
B. Texture
Texture Analysis
--> not done
Dissection
-->Detailing is great! your silhouettes look good as well as the textures. Textures hug the curve but keep in mind the detail density changes. you dont have to detail the whole form.
C. Construction
Form Intersection
-->Intersections regarding spheres are good but others are a hit and a miss. (I know it is difficult to visualize the intersections if you can use 3d models and place and observe the intersections) lines are wobbly.
Organic Intersection
--> sausages look like they have weight, overlapping good, line weight not used, shadows look incorrect
Overall feedback
-->more focused on smoothness which makes your line look wobbly and less confident
-->Also next time arrange your homework
Next Steps:
You have not done or submitted Texture Analysis so do that also Red:-
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Organic Forms with contour lines- Ellipses
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Form Intersection 2 Pages
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I would suggest you to practice Lines Homework :- Superimposed Lines, Ghosted Lines
You are doing great you just need a little more practice!!
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8:09 AM, Saturday August 12th 2023
Sorry i didnt post the texture analysis by mistake i will upload it
oops!!
and also Thanks for going through my homework
thank you very very much i will take the advice and will try to improve
4:59 PM, Thursday August 31st 2023
https://imgur.com/a/aW91NTU - The work you said
Thanks for the critique and it took me a while but i did it
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