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3:46 PM, Saturday October 10th 2020

Some of your works are good you have to improve

Lines

They are great especially your superimposed but after that your lines become wobbly as seen in ghosting and planes.

Ellipses

Same with the ellipses, they are wobbly. Try to strive in making your line straight or, they say, confident while using your shoulder. Don't repeat the lines of ellipses, twice or thrice is enough. This exercises aim to make your line smoother for the next lesson.

Boxes

The rotation is not applied in rotating boxes, especially when they get farther in the center. It is almost have the same VP. One tip in doing this exercise is to remember about the degree, once the box is further from the center, the degree will get narrower. It makes the illusion of rotation. Again, use your shoulder. Same with the organic, try to make your lines parallel.

Next Steps:

Makes your lines confident and smooth. Next lesson is about 250 box challenge, it will teach you about perspective. Applywhat you learned in boxes and lines. Good luck ????

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2:13 PM, Wednesday October 14th 2020

Thanks for the review man, for sure I will improve wobbly lines and for the perspective problem I think I need to read through the lessons again, I had a hard time to figure the last exercises out.

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