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5:14 PM, Tuesday September 21st 2021

I think you got the main principles of the lesson and are ready to move on! However, your lines don't seem to be 100% confident yet and some look a little bit shaky/scratchy. Your work was also very negatively affected by the solid black you used, it flattened your drawings a lot, I recommend you stick to the course's rules in your next lesson to keep this from happening. Your drawings without solid black look much more 3D. Good luck on your journey! :)

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7:40 PM, Friday September 24th 2021

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