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9:03 PM, Sunday June 13th 2021
Your lines are pretty good as they don't seem to have much wobbling, and you did keep you ellipses close together, and your boxes are also good, but I would recommend that when drawing in one or two point perspective you keep in mind which lines are perpendicular and which are parallel to the horizon line, and in the rotated boxes you could improve it by making the spaces between boxes more tight.
That as much as I can critique your work since I also just finished this lesson.
Next Steps:
Do the 250 box challenge
1:24 AM, Monday June 14th 2021
i also want to add a few more things ontop of this; on the ghosted box ellipses page 1, remember to finish all ellipses, i see that you missed one.
On the funnels excersize; some of your end ellipses don't cut through the middle of the minor axis. I.E. the middle funnel, final bottom ellipse doesnt cut through, same goes with top left funnel, final bottom and top ellipse.
Also on the first exersize (superimposed) your lines sometimes arch, especially on the larger lines, this can be counteracted by conciously arching in the opposite direction.
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