2:59 PM, Monday February 24th 2020
Greeting Aero!
There seems to be one clear mistake, but overall you did a good job.
In more detail.
Areas to improve:
- accuracy:
in ghosted planes, rough perspective and organic perspective exercises you seem to have rushed a few times, so accuracy went down
in other exercises like ghosted lines your accuracy is recognisably better
in tables of ellipses your angle and position can be improved
It seems to me that accuracy in rough perspective has suffered especially. So I ask you to make 2 more pages of Rough perspective focusing on vertical and horizontal lines and on planning your lines in general.
In organic perspective it really stood out that in first panels on both pages you stepped away from your curve. Yet there shouldn’t be a need to redo it.
Nice things that stood out to me:
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often your lines are really confident and there is little to no curve to them, keep that yp!
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you say you struggled with funnels and I say that thus you’ve made there quite nice ellipses
Next Steps:
2 more pages of Rough perspective.
I’ll be ready to mark this lesson as complete and suggest you to move to 250 Boxes Challenge once you send those revisions. Wish you further development!