9:19 AM, Sunday July 26th 2020
Hi, I'm still fairly new to reviewing, so I hope this is helpful. I try to follow this guide.
Lines
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Superimposed Lines: Good work here, very little wobbling and only one sided fraying, there is confidence in the straight lines.
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Ghosted Lines: Nicely done, very little over-/undershooting. There is some slight wobbling/arcing here and there. To counteract the wobbling remember to execute lines with confidence, it's ok if you don't quite hit the endpoint if it results in a straight line. For arcing it's recommended to consciously arc the arm slightly in the opposite direction.
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Ghosted Planes: Nicely done as well, though some wobbling/arcing still persists.
Ellipses
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Ellipse Table: You definitely got the idea of placing your ellipses with intent! However try sticking to drawing through your ellipses not more than 3 times, preferably only 2. Any more will make your result look messy if you stroke control isn't that good yet.
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Ellipses in Planes: This looks mostly well done. I'd only like to remind you of not drawing through your ellipses more than 3 times.
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Funnels: Nice work here, nothing to add.
Boxes
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Rough perspective: Good job. Width and height lines are mostly parallel and perpendicular to the horizon line, respectively. Line correction method was applied the right way. There lines seem a bit less confident than previously, doing some ghosted lines as a warm-up is recommended.
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Rotated Boxes: The rotations are mostly evident, remember when drawing a new box to actively use the closest edges of existing boxes to approximate the edges of the new one.
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Organic Perspective: The is a tendency for skewed planes and isometric projection, but this is something you will work on in the 250 boxes challenge.
Next Steps:
Move on to the 250 box challenge. Remember to ghost your lines and execute them confidently.