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9:02 PM, Thursday May 6th 2021

Hello! I'll try my best to give you some valuable feedback.

Your lines are really really good, I don't see any problems with them at all.

Your ellipses are also pretty good, they stay within bounds and in the tables of ellipses they don't overlap with the other ones.

You seem to superimpose some of your lines while drawing boxes which you should try to do less. Your organic perspective homework has minor perspective problems.

I think you understand the lessons pretty well, but it looks like you never finished the rotated boxes homework, there should be 12 more boxes overall, 4 rotated boxes on each of the corners, like this https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/5f4fef59.jpg

Once you do that you should be good to go to the 250 box challenge.

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Rotated boxes

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5:30 PM, Monday May 10th 2021

hello!!

thank you so much for the critique. It was very helpful.

here is the revision for the rotaded boxes.

https://imgur.com/a/If04Mkb

And it was also good that you made my aware if the superimpised lines. I think I didnt quite understand the difference but now that you pointed it out I am more aware and not doing my likes in a super imposed manner :)

thanks again :)

4:30 AM, Wednesday May 12th 2021

The revision for the rotated boxes look good, I can tell that you worked on the lines a bit and the boxes look cleaner as a result. I think you're good to move on to the boxes!

Next Steps:

250 boxes

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8:14 PM, Wednesday May 19th 2021

thank you so much fot thr critique! ?

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