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9:38 PM, Tuesday March 2nd 2021

congratulations on finishing lesson 1 let's see what you've got here.

Lines

Super Imposed Lines: I see many of your lines are a bit wobbly, there is no need to make so many big lines, you can do smaller or medium size ones that will help you to focus on getting used to using the shoulder muscles to draw, focus on making the lines flow, accuracy will come with practice. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/8/wobbling

Ghosted Lines: Againg some of the lines are wobbly, but for the most part you did a great job. You don't need to be as organized as you ware in the beginning keeping the lines one on top of the other, you can do it, but I just feel like you should focus on exercising and not on making the paper presentable. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/9/example

Ghosted Planes: I think you did a great job in here overall, well done.

Ellipses

Tables of Ellipses: I see some of your ellipses are floating a little bit, try to keep them connected to all sides of it, touching the ellipses and the lines around them, no ellipse should be alone, although your ellipses have a nice flowing stroke to them good job on that.

Ellipses in Planes: You did a nice job in here, ellipses are well drawn and most of their sides are touching their surroundings, well done.

Ellipses in Funnels: Nice job on the funnels as well! ellipses are very nicely done.

Boxes

Plotted Perspective: Nice job on plotted perspective, nothing to add here, congrats.

Rough Perspective: again you did nicely, keep practicing.

Rotated Boxes: Lovely job in here, some of the boxes are a bit misaligned but I think it ended up with a believable perspective.

Organic Perspective: You did really well in here too, sure perspective is quite criticizable but you'll learn a ton about it in the next exercise so don't mind about it for now.

Next Steps:

I think you did really great overall and I'd say that I can already see some improovement in your work, I think you are ready to go forwards with the 250 boxes challenge if you didn't started already, good luck ahead soldier ^^

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11:25 PM, Tuesday March 2nd 2021

Hello,

I will move on to the 250 boxes challenge, that's a lot, I hope I improve with this haha

Thank you so much for your critique, i truly appreciate it ????

12:26 PM, Wednesday March 3rd 2021

Your welcome man!

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