7:28 PM, Monday April 24th 2023
Definitely looking much better, in terms of the variance in rates of foreshortening. I'm also pleased to see that when you increase the rate of convergence of those side edges (resulting in a smaller far end), you're matching it with a similar increase in degree for that far end.
Additionally, your line quality - specifically with the side edges - improves towards the end of the set, although I do want to remind you to actively use every aspect of the ghosting method whenever you're freehanding your linework. Meaning, for straight lines, you do not want to leave out plotting out the start and end points, as this helps to cement the purpose of the planning phase, ensuring that you're applying it correctly rather than just going through the motions of it.
I'll go ahead and mark this challenge as complete.
Next Steps:
Move onto Lesson 6.