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8:31 PM, Thursday January 7th 2021

Hello,

you forgot to upload your second page of Ellipses in Planes(looks like its on the backside of that one page), but this aside good job for comming this far.

Lines:

Your superimposed lines are not bad the accuracy will follow with time. Always go for the confident lines like u did in this exercise. On the Ghosted Lines everything seems good, maybe your dots are a bit big and sometimes you sway a bit but thats ok in the beginning.

Besides that one page is missing the Ghosted Planes have rather much space in between them. You can gow crazy in more diffrent directions important is you should try to fill the whole page with it and use confident lines. Just stick them closer together.

Elpises:

Good job on keeping them close together and drawing through them twice

And on the Elpises in Planes you should make them touch the outside lines of the planes.

Try to make the elpises on the Funnels page touch the top and the bottom escepialy the ones more on the outside.

Boxes: Overall they look fine.

But it seems you forgot the correction lines on the rough perspective pages and some boxes are missing in the rotated boxes erxercise other wise not bad.

Overall quiet good, keep in mind try to ghost everyline and don't draw multiple times over them if u try to add lineweight.

I don't know if you allready do this or not but try to do 15mins of warmups with past exercises of your choice before you start your homework.

Next Steps:

The missing page of the elipses in planes and one extra page of them.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
9:46 PM, Thursday January 7th 2021
1:27 AM, Friday January 8th 2021
edited at 12:05 AM, Feb 10th 2021

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Next Steps:

Now you can go for the 250 box challange.

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edited at 12:05 AM, Feb 10th 2021
12:05 AM, Wednesday February 10th 2021

Hey man i should have said something earlier and not gone so easy on you, but i see you keep rushing through the lessons and skipping the challange. This way the lessons are not worth much.

If you want i will request some more revisions.

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11:45 AM, Monday June 14th 2021

looks nice. Your lines look a iittle bit wobby but that will improve with the more time you put in.

Next Steps:

looks nice. Your lines look a iittle bit wobby but that will improve with the more time you put in.

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