Alriiight! This is actually my 2nd attempt of DAB and this is the farthest I've been. I am happy but not satisfied with some exercises (which is normal) especially exercise 9, hahaha. Anyway, your feedback will be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to more of DAB. Thank youuu! =)))
Your lines are confident and drawing through the ellipses is tight, but some of the ellipses aren't smooth enough.
Some of the lines in rough perspective aren't parallel nor perpendicular.
But you pass, just the rotated boxes... They aren't rotated enough ( esp, the top set of boxes) and the boxes in the middle are too thin. Overall all boxes needs more width between the front and back planes.
Next Steps:
Do the rotated boxes again. Use the homework example as a references
Your lines are great and your ellipses too!
But i would recomend to read again the rotate boxes page and Boxes: Additional Notes. Try to undertand how you can rotate the boxes in a more significan way. Also don't be Afraid of making them a bit "longer".
Noted. Thank you!
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