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9:21 AM, Thursday July 2nd 2020

Overall well done I can see you've put a lot of effort in it.

Your lines look good just don't forget to draw them with your shoulder and don't worry about accuracy right now.

Ellipses are difficult but yours are a little bit too wobbly I'd recomend to add Ellipses in planes and Tables of Ellipses to your warm up.

Rotated Boxes exercise is p good

Organic perspective is fine, the issue is you got mistakes on perspective but it's completely fine you'll work on it in 250 boxes challenge

Also worth mentioning is that you're repeating some of your lines. No matter how off a line is don't repeat it.

Next Steps:

I'd need to see a tiny bit of improvement on the following before I can pass you:

One page of ellipses in planes

One page of tables of ellipses

I'll wait news from you)

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
5:10 AM, Friday July 3rd 2020

https://imgur.com/gallery/mqFUWfn

5:38 AM, Friday July 3rd 2020

Hi it says that image doesn't exist or been deleted. Try to reapload

5:59 AM, Friday July 3rd 2020

https://imgur.com/a/nihQTNv,

see if this work, I am new to using imgur so forgive any inconvenience

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