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10:28 PM, Saturday February 12th 2022

https://imgur.com/a/3N13IsF

Actively made an effort to draw simple sausages and draw through everything, and attaching the muzzle to the cranium to the best of my ability from the ref I used. Thanks for the crit btw

4:33 PM, Sunday February 13th 2022

That's better, good job! The only thing is that you still aren't drawing intersections between forms. Like I said you always need to connect all the forms you add so never forget to do it. Here are a few examples of intersections you didn't draw and how to approach it.

So just before moving on give me one last drawing where you draw intersections connecting all your forms, good luck and keep it up, you're almost there!

Next Steps:

One last animal drawing just like the previous ones

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
6:25 PM, Monday February 14th 2022
7:47 PM, Monday February 14th 2022

That's better, good job! Overall your drawings are pretty solid so I think you're ready for the cylinder challenge which is the next step to this lesson! One small thing I want to say is that the lineweight you add seems a bit stiff, so don't forget that when you add lineweight you must do it with a confident superimposed line, don't trace over previous lines.

That said, keep up the good work and good luck on the cylinder challenge!

Next Steps:

250 cylinder challenge

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