Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
5:23 PM, Monday August 3rd 2020
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9:24 PM, Monday August 3rd 2020
one thing that stuck out to me was the line work in some of the boxes. they seemed to quiver a little - make sure you are drawing from your shoulder. also, try to avoid going over the lines a second time - the purpose of this is to take ownership of the mistakes and learn from them. also, when you go over the lines it makes the line darker and draws attention to it. other than that, things are looking really good! :)
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1:50 PM, Saturday September 12th 2020
Hey! Good job with lesson 1!
I agree with the other critique, two main problems are that you are fixing your lines and in rough perspective I see a lot of wobbly lines: https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/9/wobbling
Just want to say that it's ok if you make a mistake and line goes accidentally wrong, leave it there for learning :)
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