11:32 PM, Friday September 24th 2021
Hey there, I'll be handling your box challenge critique.
Before getting to the critique itself however I'd like to ask you for a favour. Currently your scanner has blown out all your pages so that your lines aren't really visible, this makes it impossible to critique your actual work. If you could take pictures of your first 5 and last 5 pages in some decent day light it'll make the process much easier moving forward.
Reply to this comment with a link to the pages and I'll get to your critique.