Hello Kenny! I will take a look at your submitted work.

Beginning with the superimposed lines exercise, your straight lines are mostly smooth with little to no wobbling, and fraying only at one end. Now, as you have pointed out yourself in your page, there are times the line does start out with some fraying, meaning you rushed a little and did not take the time to place down your pen. Also note that in your curved lines, there are at least 3 instances where fraying appears on both ends. While you managed to draw most of your straight lines confidently, you prioritized accuracy on your curved lines, evident by how wobbly most of them turned out, especially in the second page. Another thing I noticed is the arcing present in the bigger lines here and in the ghosted lines exercise. This could be a natural habit of your, in which case consciously bending in the other direction will cancel it out, however, because it is mostly present in your longer lines, I suspect the reason is that you are not drawing from your shoulder and pivoting from the elbow instead. Keep in mind that the elbow does complement the shoulder, but it alone can not churn out a smooth line. So make sure you are using your whole arm. Your ghosted lines are smooth for the most part, but unfortunately I can not say the same in the ghosted planes exercise. It appears that you prioritized accuracy over smoothness, which resulted in a wobbly line. Drawing lines confidently is something you can do right now without much issue, accuracy on the other hand takes a lot of practice and something you should not concern yourself with at the start.

Your table of ellipses is coming along nicely, you drew through each twice and kept each withing each box and snugly against one another. Do note the small tip at the major axis that does appear occasionally, as well as some egg shapes. This could be a result of starting or ending at the major axis, and you noticed that you were about to miss the spot at the end, so you attempted to fix its course. One way you can avoid this is by starting and ending at the minor axis instead, that way your ellipse will not lose its symmetry. Your ellipses in planes is mostly good, you strived to keep each tangent to the box’s edges and drew most with confidence. However, there does seem to be some noticeable wobbling, mostly concentrated on your second page while more infrequent on the first. Your funnels also have some problems, while each ellipse has been kept within the bounds of each funnel and were fit inside snugly without much overlapping, the minor axis on many is misaligned, a common issue among most students when starting out, and some seem to lack symmetry which I suspect is because you focused too much on accuracy. Remember that ellipses must have two equal halves when folding them over the minor axis. One thing that could have helped you here was starting out with a narrow central ellipse, which is missing, but they still gradually increase in size or degree the further apart they are from the center. To refine your ellipses making, I suggest you return to these exercises as warm-ups before tackling future lessons for about 10 to 15 minutes.

Not much to say about your plotted perspective other that some missing back lines on some boxes, mostly on the third attempt, and some back lines not being parallel with the rest, noticeable on the first attempt. For your rough perspective, it appears you forgot to draw through each box, so expect a revision for this one. The rotated boxes have some problems. Addressing your previous comment, the best advice I can come up with is to simply not think about how the end result will turn out, and do as instructed. Sounds simple, but it is easy for us to get carried away, so it is understandable that you are having this issue, and it is good to hear that you are working on it; I am sure it will be resolved with time. Your bottom half did turn out well for the most part with narrower gaps, but the top appears to have too much guessing due to focusing too much on the end result of those boxes, as you stated. What you should do next time is to start at the bottom, using the neighboring boxes as guides to keep your gaps narrow. Another issue is most boxes lines do not converge towards the same vanishing point. Good effort still! This is an exercise that is worth returning to in the future as a warm-up, doing one corner before tackling a lesson, for example. Finally, your rotated boxes was done pretty well, there is depth to the scene and your box construction is good too, improving a lot in your second page. Do note the angle of the initial Y, to prevent the awkwardness of some boxes, the angles must be greater than 90 degrees. I would also like to point out that some of your lines were fixed because the previous attempt did not turn out well; this should be avoided, simply work with it no matter how bad it turned out. And your line making does need to improve, there is a lot of wobbling here due to focusing too much on accuracy so keep this in mind.

You are almost done! All I am going to ask you is to finish the page of rough perspective with the missing back lines and some extended lines (remember to not focus on accuracy and keep your lines smooth.) So take your time and reply to me with the link once you are done.