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2:49 PM, Monday June 8th 2020

Sure!

Some funnels(especially the ones on the end (the biggest ones) aren't symmetrical to the Y-axis so basically the line in the middle.)

When it comes to the lower layer : comparatively to the box in the middle each upper layer to the left and to the right and up and down should have a smaller and tilted surface. The lower layer should obey to the same principle. For Example the box next to the central one on the right has a correct perspective on the upper layer cause it starts next to it so it has the same length on the edges and then gets thinner with distance cause of the rotation(objectively it has the same size but because of the perspective(the rotation)it look smaller and you draw it as if it was smaller)), but you drew the lower layer as if it wasn't rotated at all - as you look further to the right it also should get thinner, but instead it keeps the same length. Do you get it, or was this explenation to convoluted?

10:02 PM, Monday June 8th 2020

Thanks that cleared things up for me! I will work on improving those areas.

5:14 PM, Monday June 22nd 2020

Hello! Your critique of my lesson 1 submission was very useful, would you mind critiquing my 250 box challenge submission too please?

1:54 AM, Thursday June 25th 2020

Hey! I haven't completed it yet myself, so I'm not really qualified...besides, there seem to be a lot of submissions, so I don't think you're getting your critique..neither am I once I'm finished with my boxes. I think I'll just become a patron and send it for an official review.

4:37 PM, Monday June 29th 2020

Thanks anyway. I think will do that too actually.

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