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1:13 PM, Wednesday July 21st 2021
edited at 1:14 PM, Jul 21st 2021

Hi there! You're making progress but sometimes you still make your lines a bit wobbly, so to make sure that you know how to draw confidently I want you to draw one organic perspective box, and take one photo after every single line you draw. After drawing each line note at the side which level that line is. Keep in mind that all lines that are wobbly (not straight) no matter how accurate they will be a level 0 Top line here is a level 1 line and bottom is a level 0 one, as an example.

I also think you might be rushing a little bit at times. Make sure you take as much time as you need to do your best on every line you draw. You haven't drawn starting and ending dots on some boxes as well, so make sure you always do it as it's extremely important for the ghosted lines exercise.

And last thing, your lineweight lines are a bit wobbly as well, superimposed lines as lineweight should be confident as well.

Good luck and keep it up!

Next Steps:

Draw a box as explained. One picture per line.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
edited at 1:14 PM, Jul 21st 2021
10:43 PM, Tuesday August 10th 2021

Here's the link for this assignment! Let me know if you can get to it okay.

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1qDbUF2Ln0h-LhaijKVkL-G16M2Q-YjfJ?usp=sharing

9:50 PM, Thursday August 12th 2021

Alright, looking good! Your lines are looking better overall. Keep trying from now on to make all your lines at least level 1, that's your main goal. And just as a side thing, after you can consistently get lines to be at least level 1, focus on making them overshoot less. Try to experiment with ghosting to improve it, ghosting more times, ghosting slower etc.

I think you've grasped the main concepts of the lesson so I think you're ready for the box challenge. Good luck and keep up the good work!

Next Steps:

250 box challenge

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