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1:40 PM, Saturday April 9th 2022

Hello Im Angela and Ill be critiquing your work !

Lines:

  • Theres fraying on both ends. Make sure to take your time to place your pen on the right spot.

  • Some of your lines are arching.

  • Make sure to prioritize confidence over accuary

Ellipses:

  • There should be 2 pages of table of ellipses.

  • Your Ellipses are smooth & confidence.

Boxes:

  • I think you should spilt one page into 3 sections but It shouldnt be a problem.

  • Your Rotated Boxes should be 5x5 and your boxes arent rotating.

You did well !

Next Steps:

Move onto 250 Box Challenge !!

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4:21 PM, Saturday April 9th 2022

Hello, thank you for your critique! Could you tell me, please, What do you mean by splitting one Page into three sections? I mean in which exercise

12:20 AM, Sunday April 10th 2022

All the boxes exercises expect for rotated boxes.

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These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.

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