thanks for the critique.

i agree with the first point. i have to remind myself that it's about confidence and not accuracy but when the line wasnt what i had in mind i feel compelled to 'correct' it. i'll work on stopping that habit.

i was getting a little frustrated with the ellipses because they seemed so volatile and difficult to ghost. that's why i was making the extra passes, but it didn't really fix much, lol. i'll stop that as well and work with what i put down.

i havent thought too much about pressure, but i'll keep it in mind when i move into the 250 box challenge. i didn't shadow on rotated because i mostly just wanted to get into organic perspective after spending an hour on it. i also wasnt aware of the proper spacing or quantity of the boxes in organic perspective.

i didn't realize that my notes and circles would be problematic, but i definitely see what you mean. that'll stop. i also didnt obtain the proper supplies for drawabox until halfway through this first lesson. i now have fine liners and a wet-medium sketchbook or two.

thanks again for the critique!