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5:25 PM, Monday April 3rd 2023

Hi congratulations for completing lesson 1, here is my critique I hope it helps

Lesson 1.

Lines.

In the lines section you do it as you’re meant to do it.

Ellipses.

I see a problem with the table of ellipses exercise, you do a bit wobbly the ellipses and sometimes you do one ellipse too short or too fast.

Boxes.

In the boxes exercises you need to understand that the boxes always have parallel sides and they’re affected by perspective and converge to the VP so try to remember that it will help you to understand better the perspective.

Next Steps:

I see that you fail a bit in the perspective and it will help you to rewatch the introducción to perspective video and re do the rough perspective exercise. Then you can move on to the 250 box challenge

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
11:46 AM, Tuesday April 4th 2023

Thank you so much for the critique!

When i was doing the rough perspective i noticed issues as well, especially near then end. I thiink i do understand it better now, but i will make sure to re watch the video.

2:03 PM, Saturday April 8th 2023

So i have done the redo.

https://imgur.com/a/57MDJqu

5:09 PM, Sunday April 9th 2023

You do it very well and you learned from your mistakes now you can move to the 250 box challenge.

This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
2:05 PM, Monday April 10th 2023

Thank you))

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