5:30 PM, Thursday March 23rd 2023
hello fellow learner,
congratulation on completing the first lesson! i will divide my feedback according to the lesson:-
- Lines
Your lines are a little wobbly, try to focus on ghosting out your lines as many times as it takes for you to comfortably make a quick, smooth motion along the right trajectory.
The ending points of your Superimposed Lines are also a little frayed, which is fine but you can fixing them by taking more time at ghosting out your lines.
you did a good job at the ghosted lines exercise- your lines are confident and smooth
I noticed arching only on the longer lines.
- Ellipses
You are drawing through your ellipses twice, which is great of the ellipses in your Ellipses in Boxes overlap one another, or the boundaries of the frame. This latter problem due to a lack of time spent before putting pen to paper.
Your Funnels look quite good too.
- Boxes
First of all, I can see that you are properly drawing through your boxes everywhere you were instructed to do so. Good work. You also applied the line correction method properly in your Rough Perspective exercise
few of the boxes in the the rotated box exercise are slightly off.
I liked your organic perspective exercise. The only issues in this exercise in the line weight. the boxes closer to us should be have darker lines.
Overall I definitely see progress in your work.