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3:32 AM, Monday January 25th 2021

Lines:

  1. Great job!. All lines start at one point and fray as expected at the end, you surely read the instructions and saw the benefits

  2. I can see the your ghosted lines look good but the ghosted planes suffered a bit. I think you were probably worried about not extending beyond the end point and they look a bit wobbly. Just keep that in mind

Ellipses

  1. Your ellipses are accurate and round, you really got a handle of them. Much better than mine :)

  2. On the cones, like me, you forgot to change the size of the minor axis as you moved from the inside to the outside on some of them

Boxes:

  1. On the rough perspective you did great, just some vertical lines that are not vertical at all, but you got your estimations for the vanishing points really well, impressive actually on some boxes

  2. On rotating boxes, on the process of rotation, some boxes stopped being boxes, but this is a hard exercise, maybe in the 250 box challenge things will become more natural (I'm working on mine)

  3. Organic perspective: You really made it challenging for yourself with the wobbly reference and you did really good to follow. I think we were supposed to draw the lines, even when they are behind another box. Go back to the exercise instructions and check

Next Steps:

Add missing lines in the Organic perspective exercise when boxes overlap

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6:11 PM, Monday January 25th 2021

PABLITOARIAS, Thank you for your kind and helpfull comments, you are right about organic perspective. So, I checked the exercise and revised the drawing as below link. Hope they are acceptable as the lesson requires. https://imgur.com/a/upCQlXV

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1:56 AM, Wednesday January 27th 2021

Findlost

Wait for agreement to my comments or another review and move to the 250 box challenge

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4:57 PM, Wednesday January 27th 2021

It is looks great. I want to say that your ellipses and square are very well. Only your lines can be improved further. Looks great for lesson 1. Congratulations!

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5:22 PM, Wednesday January 27th 2021

It is looks great. I want to say that your ellipses and square are very well. Only your lines can be improved further. Looks great for lesson 1.

Next Steps:

just go on

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5:37 PM, Wednesday January 27th 2021

I see your improving gradually in shapes and proportions. I also believe that you will improve yourself more than this within the further lessons. Don't give up!

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