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12:58 AM, Thursday March 24th 2022

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1:51 PM, Thursday March 24th 2022

hi , you are right, Should be sorted now let me know.

9:21 PM, Thursday March 24th 2022

I can see them now, thanks.

These are definitely a step in the right direction.

Your forms are looking simpler which is great.

When drawing organic intersections they still appear to be left floating at times rather than wrapping around one another believably but this is progress and I have no doubt that as you keep practicing it'll click.

I'll be marking your submission complete and move you on to lesson 3.

Keep practicing previous exercises as warm ups, I hope you enjoy the event and good luck in lesson 3.

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