Lines :

Good superimposed lines . But are those longest lines really curve lines ? i hope you know that we need to draw the first line with ruler and then superimpose over them using ghosting method and from shoulder . if you know then , GREAT . if not then i advice you to read the chapter again , about lines.

Good job on ghosted lines and ghosted planes . They are excellent .

Ellipses :

You have a good starting in ellipses in plane , except you are not suppose to draw through circle more than 3 times. Your ellipses in table are loosely packed. But well done on drawing them confidently. same with funnel exercises , your elipses are supposed to be snugged properly . And i dont understand why you drew multiple minor axis on various funnels ,please dont do this. Incase you forgot , minor axis is supposed to be drawn with ruler .

Boxes :

plotted perspective is very well done.

rough perspective is "okay" . I think you'll learn more about it in 250 box challenge so dont worry.

oh and your rotated box isnt rotating at all . They all are facing the same way to the viewer . lines are okay but i think you havent grasped the idea of "rotating box" i suggest you to go back to it and learn more properly .

your organic perspective is very jumbled up . I dont see the idea of depth in it ( the fact that farther box should appear small and nearer box should be drawn bigger ) try drawing neatly and lesser box next time . Also you need to use lineweight to convey which boxes overlaps the other. ( Though you have done it in second row or first page , i dont see it in practise on other. again , the work is too jumbled )

Hi!

Nice work overall. I'm specificly impressed by your Rough Perspective. Even if they are off (like everybody else at this point), they all point in the right direction. Nice!

I would just suggest some issues:

• Your superimposed lines are supposed to be superimposed on a straight first line! Anyway you seem to ghost and mark properly in the following exercise so don't bother rediong this stuff.

• In your Organic Perspective, you should have done less boxes, but emphasize more the depth with bigger variation of scale. But the amount of boxes you draw is impressive, so I don't think if you would really benefit from redoing it.

• Your rotated boxes isn't done properly : your front cubes aren't supposed to be on the same plane. This misconception of the instruction makes you miss the point of the exercise.

Otherwise it's a solid piece of work!