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9:55 PM, Saturday November 6th 2021

Your arrows are good, although some of them seem to be a little wobbly.

You did really well with the contour ellipses and curves, but I'd say that you could use less , so that you are less likely to mess up, a few well placed ones should be enough.

You did really well on the textures.

On the pages with the 3D shapes, remember to not use a lot of foreshortening as ut further complicates things and could undermine the overall exercise.

And finally on the sausages, I'd recommend you to use less contour lines, basically the same thing I told you before.

You did really well overall.

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10:54 AM, Sunday November 7th 2021

Thank you, I will take your comments into consideration. I will work on it more.

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