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9:37 AM, Tuesday July 7th 2020

Hi samurai jac

thanks so much for your critique, it was very insightful.

Yes you're right i didn't plot dots before committing to a line where you've stated. I'm not sure why i didnt either, but I'll start doing dots more now.

interesting to never redraw a line. I think i must have skimmed over that part in the reading material, I'll try placing more dots and not correcting.

thanks again for the critique and for giving mw some stuff to work on!

3:11 PM, Wednesday July 8th 2020

"interesting to never redraw a line. I think i must have skimmed over that part in the reading material, I'll try placing more dots and not correcting."

I just re-read Lesson 0 and Lesson 1 and I couldn't find it in the text! So I'm not surprised you missed it. But I am positive that you are not suppose to redraw lines that are off. Uncomfortable may have mentioned it in a video; I know I frequently seen it repeated in other lesson 1 critiques.

Good luck and have fun!

Cheers,

Jac

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