6:05 PM, Friday September 4th 2020
Hello
I'll be reviewing your work
First thing i notice is that you are putting too much pressure on your ink pen, and its sometimes leaving blank marks behind. You don't need to put too much force on your pen.
Lessons up until funnels are well made then it seems like you are having problems where everyone else also struggles the first time.
Your rough perspective boxes are really off, i feel like you didn't understand the idea behind VP's or this lesson. Your red lines need to go as close as possible to the VP while keeping the box normal (not looking weird, some of yours are really wobbly and off looking).
Lastly the point of the Organic Perspective lesson is so that you understand how distance works in drawing. The further away an object it's size will be reduced. All your boxes here seem really close to each other which gives the illusion of everything being really close to the viewer.
Overall you have done well in lesson 1 but you need to draw 2 more pages and ill consider this lesson finished.
Next Steps:
1x Page of Rough Perspective
1x Page of Organic Perspective