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4:21 AM, Saturday January 30th 2021
edited at 4:32 AM, Jan 30th 2021

Line solidity looks fine, a times shaky but mostly good, ellipses are kind of uneven, remember to ghost them as well, just like you would ghost your straight lines. Your rough perspective boxes look odd, the lines are quite shaky, so you should take more time, but also the perspective is too perfect, i dont know if you did the exercise as intended, but the point of it should be to try and eyeball it, and after the boxes are done see if you were accurate or not, since this is different from the plotted perspective boxes, to me its seem clear that you did something wrong, either you first make the perspective lines and then the boxes, or something. Your rotated boxes are fine, but you lack some, the boxes should be 5x5, take more time reading the instructions.

Next Steps:

Take time ghosting, read the instructions and move into 250 boxes challenge, good luck

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edited at 4:32 AM, Jan 30th 2021
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4:58 PM, Friday February 5th 2021

hi Christianis

i agree with the preveouse post, and you misunderstood the non ploted perspektiv box exercise, you should have draged your line that you made on the boxes too the horizon to see where they converge and how far of you are, same thing you will have to do with the 250 boxes exercise.

Take it a bit slower and you should be fine.

Next Steps:

take your time with the 250 boxes and check your perspektive after every page you complete

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