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12:20 AM, Wednesday September 16th 2020

I love it! I think that everything is a pass except for your confidence in line. I would recommend you to read the lesson about line (especially here where it talk about smooth: https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/2).

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Do 1 page of Ghosted Planes but first read carefully the lesson. remember not to worry about accuracy at first.

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7:09 AM, Wednesday September 16th 2020

thank you so much for the feedback I definitely struggle with line confidence and especially drawing shorter lines from the shoulder. I'll post my homework soon

10:18 AM, Wednesday September 16th 2020

in this excercise I focused on trying to keep my lines streight and draw them wiftly as well as locking my wrist better thus sacrificing abselute acuracy.I hope its good enough. https://imgur.com/jqCUqZT

10:43 AM, Wednesday September 16th 2020

yea I see improvement continue making ghosted planes and ellipsis in planes as warmups and eventually you will get better and better.

Next Steps:

I think you are ready for the 250 box challenge :D remember to warmup!

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