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1:05 PM, Friday September 11th 2020
Your lines are clean, there is not much wobbling, but just a small thing: the lines at the end changed direction. So you tried to force the line to end at the point. The quality of the line is more important.
On the other hand, in the superimposed lines the lines are far from the end and they arched a bit.
Some of the ellipses in funnels didn't align to the minor axis.
Some of the boxes aren't rotated, esp the outer ones.
There is not much variation in the line weight in organic boxes.
Next Steps:
Do the rotated boxes again, look at the reference this time to help you better. There were just small remarks on the other exercises, but I suggest doing an extra page of ghosted lines, superimposed lines, funnels and organic boxes.
7:43 PM, Saturday September 12th 2020
thnx for the feedback, much appretiated
12:19 PM, Tuesday September 15th 2020
That's better rotation :)
Next Steps:
Go for 250 boxes challenge.
4:06 PM, Wednesday September 16th 2020
thanks :D
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