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9:05 PM, Monday February 22nd 2021

This is a good improvement! I can see that the quality of your mark making is steadily improving and you are doing a better job of getting your sets of lines to converge towards their shared vanishing points and you no longer appear to be keeping your sets of lines purposely parallel. Good job!

I will go ahead and mark this lesson as complete and you may now move onto lesson 2!

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Continue to lesson 2!

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
6:30 PM, Wednesday February 24th 2021

Thank you so much for your critiques!

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