Hello and congrats on completing lesson one. I'll be taking a look at your submission today. Starting with your superimposed lines these are off to a fine start. You are keeping a clearly defined starting point with all of your wavering at the opposite end. Your ghosted lines and planes turned out well. You are using the ghosting method to good effect to get confident linework with a pretty decent deal of accuracy that will get better and better with practice.

Your tables of ellipses are coming along pretty good. You are doing a good job drawing through your ellipses and focusing on consistent smooth ellipse shapes. This is carried over nicely into your ellipses in planes. It's great that you aren't overly concerned with accuracy and are instead focused on getting smooth ellipse shapes. Although accuracy is our end goal it can't really be forced and tends to come with mileage and consistent practice more than anything else. Your ellipses in funnels are having some issues with tilting off the minor axis and I'm also noticing that a few of these are starting to look a bit deformed. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/13/notaligned This is something you should always start considering when drawing your ellipses. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/12/deformed The deformed ellipses are probably happening because you are getting a bit too concerned with accuracy and are slowing down your stroke to compensate. Try and rely on the muscle memory you build up ghosting a bit more. Your ellipses are off to a nice start and I'm not seeing any really bad habits forming. There's still plenty of room for improvement when it comes to accuracy so keep practicing these during your warmups.

The plotted perspective looks great, nothing to mention here. Your rough perspective exercises turned out okay. You are getting a mix of confident linework here along with pretty wobbly linework creeping back into some of your lines. Once again this is probably happening because you are more concerned with accuracy now that you are constructing boxes and you are slowing down your stroke to compensate. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/9/wobbling There is also the possibly you have reverted back to using your wrist to draw some of these lines. Always remember to ghost your lines multiple times and draw from your shoulder with confidence. Even on short lines. You are doing a good job extending the lines back on your boxes to check your work. As you can see some of your perspective estimations were quite off but that will become more intuitive with practice.

The rotated box exercise was a bit of a struggle. You did a good job drawing through your boxes and keeping your gaps fairly consistent. You are getting really wobbly linework again. This tends to happen more now that you are thinking about box constructions. Just remember to take your time and break your drawing down into several steps.

  1. Put Down your points (This is where all of your thinking about the line accuracy should happen)

  2. Ghost your line multiple times

  3. Execute your line with confidence and don't concern yourself with accuracy during this step and try and rely on the muscle memory your built up ghosting

You're not quite nailing your rotations which is perfectly fine given the difficulty of this exercise. This is a great one to come back to after a few lessons to see how much your spatial thinking ability has improved. Your organic perspective exercises are a bit of a mixed bag. You seem to be more getting comfortable using the ghosting method and drawing from your shoulder for confident linework which is great. However, your box constructions could definitely use some work so the 250 box challenge will be a great next step for you.

Overall this was a pretty good submission that showed a nice deal of growth. Your line confidence started to falter a bit with your rough perspective boxes but I think you are showing solid improvements with the organic perspective exercise. I think you are understanding most of the concepts these lessons are trying to convey pretty well. I'm going to mark this as complete and good luck with the 250 box challenge!