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1:43 PM, Friday October 30th 2020

RPMFX gave you a nice critique (I'm just gonna repeat in my opinion the biggest problems you should work on first) and its hard to judge at the beginning if you're inexperienced or doing something wrong.

The main thing I would strongly emphasize as he said it is to draw confidently from the shoulder and prioritize smoothness and confidence over accuracy. The elipses are especially wobbly. The second biggest problem would be with the boxes as it seems you didn't actually think where they should go. Imagine the line from one point to the other ghost it and actually look where your arm is going and adjust accordingly. I noticed it myself the difference when you think you are ghosting to adjust and when you actually ghost to adjust.

Otherwise good luck.

1:59 PM, Friday October 30th 2020

thanks you for the advice! I will work on making my lines more confident and using my shoulder all the time.

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