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8:26 PM, Monday December 12th 2022

https://imgur.com/a/T6mpZQo

Sorry i didn't reply in a long time, i did this as soon as I saw your critique but forgot to post it before i disappeared. But anyways, i hope this is an improvement.

4:47 AM, Wednesday December 14th 2022

Hello! No worries, it's alright.

For the revision, the only thing that i can give critique on is the form right at the top. it's kinda wonky and doesn't seem to "hold" itself well as if it'll fall anytime soon. Please check the link that i gave below.

https://imgur.com/a/11trnVV

Also, you forgot to draw through the forms! It's very critical for one's to think in a 3D space, require one's to draw the unseeable forms.

Nevertheless, you can feel free to move on to L3, good luck ^^

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