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3:18 AM, Thursday September 15th 2022
Hi. COngratulations on finishing the box challenge. I will give my feedback on your submission:
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Your lines are straight, have no wobbling and you successfully connected all edges without fraying.
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Your extension lines are incorrectly drawn. Those lines must ALWAYS go away from the viewer's eyes, as seen here: https://imgur.com/a/uJ2ZoPm
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Your VPs must be located behind the box, and your extension lines must converge as they approach the VP, as seen here: https://imgur.com/a/QsxIGla
In the constraints of this lesson, your boxes must not have any parallel pair of lines. All lines must converge at a VP that is not infinitely far away: https://imgur.com/iNpIubA
A quick guide to illustrate my point: https://imgur.com/Kqg6uMX
Next Steps:
Please do another 20 boxes with the instructions given above. If you have any questions, reply to this message before putting pen to paper and I will be glad to help.
11:44 PM, Friday September 16th 2022
Hello, thank you so much for your critique! I really appreciate it
Here's my work: https://imgur.com/a/fdexLVc
Hopefully they're a bit better this time
7:05 AM, Saturday September 17th 2022
You got them right, mate. Although there are still minor issues: https://imgur.com/a/hVsr1fK , I would say those mistakes are acceptable for now, but you must work on, and fix, them in the future.
Next Steps:
You can go to Lesson 2 now.
1:41 PM, Saturday September 17th 2022
Thank you so much!!
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