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3:47 AM, Thursday September 3rd 2020

Hello Uncomfortable! Thank you for the feedback, here are the additional 4 drawings: https://imgur.com/a/ey1xovK

I drew one animal a day and used the sausage method for the limbs. I can see the effect of using sausages instead of 2D shapes to define the limbs, it was more definitely more effective at convincing me that they were 3D forms. I still do struggle with drawing small sausages properly, but I will keep practicing. I also broke down big masses into smaller masses and tried to make sure I was wrapping them around each intersecting form, but I wonder if I overdid it for the moose? Looking forward to the feedback.

3:54 AM, Thursday September 3rd 2020
edited at 3:55 AM, Sep 3rd 2020

Just in case the above link doesn't work, here is an alternative link: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Nhxre1FNWC2W16MwEZN7u35JPBDYKAhi?usp=sharing

edited at 3:55 AM, Sep 3rd 2020
3:28 PM, Thursday September 3rd 2020

This is looking much better, and I don't feel you overdid it on the moose. Remember that these drawings are all exercises, and in working through them you're trying to solve a puzzle. I'm not concerned with whether you used too many forms - what I'm glad to see is that you tried to figure out how to achieve the intended result, using only these smaller additional forms, while figuring out how they'd relate to one another in space.

All in all I'm very pleased with your results. I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.

Next Steps:

Feel free to move onto the 250 cylinder challenge, which is a prerequisite for lesson 6.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
9:47 PM, Thursday September 3rd 2020

Thanks so much again! Really appreciate it.

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