Hii SASHAINES127

Here is ur delicious hard love criticism

Lines

Superimposed lines: they are good and perfect but ur curve lines try to draw them with ur shoulder in faster than the normal speed (but not superfast) it might give smooth and continuous curves

Ghosted lines: I can see ur lines are bit wobble at the end. here is a super tip, while drawing ur line u try to stop ur pen when u come near the endingpoint it cause wobbling at the end of the line instead try this before reaching the end point slightly lift ur pen. In the ending point take off ur pen from the paper. Like the plane take off. Besides It avoids overshooting

Ghosted planes: u r planes are good but some lines are exceeds the edges and some end before the edge apply the ghosted lines method here (the plane take off method)

Ellipse

Ellipse in planes: they are great

Ellipse in tables: they are good some of them are bit wobbly and not so smooth. I know ellipse might take time when compare to lines. So take ur time. with a bit more practice it will become perfect and dont leave space between ur ellipses every ellipse should touch each other and the border of the table but should not overlap with other and table border. u can achieve it by ghosting it before drawing the ellipse

Ellipse in funnels: as i said before dont leave space and dont overlap them. The purpose of this exercise is , the center minor axis should cut every ellipse in the funnel into two equal half. one of ur funnel break the rule ( right end funnel)

Boxes

Plotted Perspective: they are perfect

Rough perspective: they are great. I like that ur vertical and horizontal lines in ur boxes are perfectly parallel and perpendicular to ur horizon

Rotated Perspective: they are perfect. the spaces between the corner of the back face of the boxes are perfect.

Organic perspective: they are good. the scaling of the boxes are great as the distance increases the boxes reduces in size.

Cheers

Jansiva