10:39 PM, Thursday March 18th 2021
This is looking way better. Just a couple things to keep in mind:
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For the texture analyses, these are looking great, but one area where improvement can still be had is to stretch out more of the dark/dense section of the texture. Right now it's kind of cramped over on the far left - extend it out more towards the middle, so there's a more notable transition sparse to dense.
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Keep working on your ellipses, specifically in your form intersections. Overall your use of the ghosting method is definitely coming along pretty well, but there is just a little bit of looseness that suggests you might be jumping into the execution of those marks a little more exuberantly than you could, and this is most visible in the ellipses which tend to come out a bit more loose. I'm actually in the process of editing the new videos for the ellipses section of Lesson 1, and they should be out either this weekend or next week. I recommend that you keep an eye out for them, and give them a watch when they come out.
All in all, really great progress. I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.
Next Steps:
Move onto lesson 3.