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1:07 AM, Monday November 8th 2021
Things you did great
Lineweight was a great touch, and definately madenit easier to analyze.
Not much divergence: I didnt really see your lines duverge from one another much (excluding back corners). Generally, all of your lines met the othwrs at some point.
Confident lines: your lines are straight, aacurate, and clean, even with lineweight.
Good variety: I think you practiced with all kinds of perspectives and boxes, which will help you a lot in the long run.
Things to improve
Drawing larger: near the end you seem to do this, but overall drawing larger boxes would be helpful for learning how to use your shoulder and such.
Converging in pairs: i dont think you are always visualizing all 4 lines at once. Often two lines will converge, and tge other rwo will converge, but not all four.
I think this looks great. Obviously there is room for improvement but you've made great strides already and its clear you put a lot of work into this. Your boxes in the begginning are drastically different than the end, at least in my opinion, so i think you leatned what you needed to here. Awesome job!
Next Steps:
lesson 2 :)
11:42 PM, Monday November 29th 2021
Thank you very much for the critique my friend. I'll keep the things you said very much in mind.
godspeed!
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