7:36 PM, Tuesday August 2nd 2022
Hi there, I will be critiquing your lesson 1
Lines
-Starting with your superimposed lines, you did well at maintaining confidence with your markmaking. You also did well with starting off at one clear point every time. The only thing to address here is the expected fraying which should disappear with further practice.
-Ghosted lines are looking confident as well and always make sure to give the line one consistent trajectory even if it misses. Overall, these turned out great.
-Ghosted planes are similar to your ghosted lines and it seems that you committed to your lines better.
Ellipses
-Looking at your table of ellipses I can see that you maintained tidiness and confidence. You also did well with keeping the ellispes symmetrical and well rounded which should always be prioritzed.
-Your ellipses in planes are turning out nice and confidents as well and always remember that you can only change the width and what position the ellipse is in. Otherwise, these look good.
-The ellipses in funnels are turning out a lot better in regards to the symmetry. You also did well with keeping most of them tidy inside of the funnels.
Boxes
-Rough perspective is turning out well and I do see that the estimates are a bit off, but this will improve with further practice.
-The rotated boxes are looking good, but one thing I would like to mention is that you should give yourself some more room to ghost as it will make it easier for you to place your marks. You also gave a good attempt at the rotation of the boxes.
-Lastly, the organic perspective is looking fine and any issues I may not have mentioned in this section will be addressed in the 250 Box Challenge.
*Use lesson 1 in your warmups
I'm going to mark your lesson as complete and you should be able to move on. Good job :)
Next Steps:
250 Box Challenge