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1:01 PM, Thursday August 20th 2020

Lines

Most of your lines look like they are draw confidently with one stroke.

The lines on the superimposed lines exercise seem to fray a lot, try to practice on smaller lines first and then move onto bigger ones.

Ellipses

The funnel ellipses are equally divided as well as within the bounds. The table of ellipses also look good.

In the ellipses in plane exercise you seem to concentrate more on the ellipse touching the edges than the shape of the ellipse. The shape of the ellipse should be the first priority. Aside from that everything seems fine.

Boxes

Your lines in organic perspective look confident but the ones in rough perspective seem wobbly and less confident. The rotated boxes also look finely rotated except for the wobbly lines in the back planes.

That is all I have for you

Next Steps:

I recommend you complete the 250 box challenge before moving onto lesson 2.

This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
6:40 AM, Friday August 21st 2020

Thank you for your feed back, I'll practise more and go to the 250 box challenge.

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