8:15 PM, Wednesday June 7th 2023
Congratulations on getting through lesson 1! Here is some feedback. In a nutshell, you've done really solid work.
Lines
These are looking really clean and confident. A few on the dot-to-dot have a bit of curve or wobble at the end, but the frayed lines and planes are just pretty.
Ellipses
The table of ellipses looks really clean, you pass through each one 2-3 times, and you vary the degree and tilt. On the ellipses in planes, they fit pretty well, although there is a bit of a tendency to make them pointy where they touch the edges. The ellipses in funnels look good.
Boxes
The 2 point perspective looks good, as does the rough perspective and rotated boxes. The organic perspective shows the size decreasing as the boxes move away. While a few of the boxes seem to have diverging lines, you’ll work on this a ton for the 250 box challenge, so that’s okay for now. This is how I like to think about constructing boxes, if it helps: https://imgur.com/a/CP1JmaB
Next Steps:
This is fabulous--now good luck with the 250 box challenge!