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2:20 PM, Sunday August 27th 2023
Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight I am Darklight
i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.
1.Superimposed Lines
Although your line are fraying on both ends ,I can see that you are trying to do it in the 1st although it is not perfect I can say it is good with enough practice you can master it.
Your lines are confident great job.
2.Ghosted Lines
Your lines are confident as I said earlier. Few overshooting which is not bad. a very litte few undershooting. You did great job hitting the start dot and end. It's actually so gOod
3.Ghosted Planes
It's so perfect that you have very confident line. Most of them hitting start to end dots.
Your execution are Awesome
4.Tables of Ellipses
Overall you did great job being confident and great job almost all of the circle are snuggles each other its so clean and beautiful. Although the circle are not accurate just keep practicing and you will master it.
5.Ellipses in Planes
Same as tables of ellipeses.
just be mindful on undershooting on somecircle. overshooting is better than undershooting those circle to establish confident circles. but overall u did great.
6.Funnels
Great work being confident
A few of the ellipse are not snugly against one another so be mindful of that. great Job
Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.
A few undershooting again just be mindful on that so next time you do it you won't do the same mistake.
7.Plotted Perspective
Great work on this.
LOVE THAT YOU HAVE OVERLAPPING BOXES
8.Rough Perspective
LINES ARE CONFIDENT THAT GOOD.
You did great job Hitting the VP of some lines
And plotting the front of the boxes
9.Rotated Boxes
It's so clean i like it.
The gaps are consistent
most of the boxes are pointing towards Vp
some of the boxes are not hitting the middle vp but you will have a lot opportunity on fixing this on 250 box just be mindfull on that.
A few wobbles but it's still good
You really did great Job on this thing.
10.Organic Perspective
Your lines here are confident, some lines are wobbly just be mindful on that.
You did great making small boxes as they are far.
some of it are parallel to each other.
This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge6
Again congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall.
Next Steps:
CONGRATULAITONSAFIB ON FINISHING LESSON 1 YOUR ARE READY TO TAKE THE 250 BOX CHALLANGE.NO RUSH. REMEMBER DO WARM UPS AND JOIN DISCORD SO PEOPLE CAN CRIT YOUR BOXES FROM TIME TO TIME.
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