I have some unfortunate news - while you appear to have approached your line extensions a little differently from the initial attempt (your last attempt had you only extending the box's lines back in space, this attempt has you extending the side edges of the cylinders as well), you are still entirely missing what the instructions are saying.

The instructions I linked you to when assigning the revisions - and I pointed this out in my last critique as well - have us add to the box's own line extensions three additional lines per ellipse. One for each ellipse's minor axis line, and two "contact point lines" which pass through the points at which each ellipse touches the edges of its enclosing plane. Each plane has four edges, giving each ellipse 4 contact points, and each contact point line goes through two of them.

You have once again completely missed this. Please do the 100 cylinders in boxes again. If you have further questions, our community over on our discord chat server can help you out and ensure that you're on the right track. Given that you are struggling with following the instructions, it may not be a bad idea to seek confirmation there with your first couple of pages to ensure you're on the right track.