5:33 AM, Sunday March 1st 2020
Hey! I’ll be looking though this~
Starting off, your lines look good, though I do notice a tendency to arc a little, so be mindful of that. Also, if you’re not (it’s a little hard to tell), be sure to plot start/end points for the non-diagonal center lines of the planes.
Nice job on your ellipses. A couple of things... Be careful to go around them 2 full times, (and no more than 3.) At the end of your rotations, don’t flick the pen off the page, as it causes you to run off-course- lift it off the page, instead. There’s an extra page of the funnels exercise, for some reason. Be a little more mindful of the page requirements, please. Also, try not to get too overwhelmed- the quality of your ellipses takes a slight dip here. Finally, remember that the minor axis is meant to cut an ellipse into 2 equal, symmetrical halves (so they should be standing upright, rather than tilting.)
The box section is a bit of a mixed bag. The technical aspects are good, but the line-work is a bit chicken-scratchy. Don’t redo lines, if you can help it. If a line is wrong, it’s wrong- adding more ink to that general are just makes it stand out more. If you need that line to be correct, use a red pen, instead. There’s 4 missing boxes in the rotated boxes exercise, and the foreshortening is a bit inconsistent in the organic perspective exercise, but solid attempt at both. I do wish you’d tried some more 3 point perspective boxes for that last one, though. There’ll be plenty of chances to in a second, though. xD
Congrats on finishing, and consider this lesson complete. GL on the challenge!
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250 Box Challenge